this my 2nd and 3rd
 

dont be harsh im new to photoshop rate 1 to 10

hmmm you need better text effects and you need to blend your renders, it looks like you just took the same backgroung and through some renders on it using a semi-defult text, 3/10

Exactly...2/10 they both look the same pretty much.

lol not even i could blend my renders :P

better???? i think so